This was very cool,
This was very cool. I liked the story overall, from helping the guy get into the circus to helping the kid look cool in front of his friends. You have a clear world in mind, and the named characters feel fleshed out. Defiantly makes you want to see more of them.
If I did have to nitpick I’d say that the story is a bit linear, I don’t think that’s a bad thing but I did notice that there were a few times where the character didn’t get to make choices and it was kind of like moving you to the next thing. I don’t know if it would mess with the timing of the story so I’m not sure if it’s doable for you, but one example would be if the player could chose what task to do each time, like Do you want to clean the animals or do you want to let the apple game person go on break? But like I said I also recognize that those are like time sensitive due to the circus schedule in the story.