Really interesting perspective and thanks for the feedback! My intention was to use the synthesizer to imitate natural buzzing sounds. And since this was my first time taking part in this kind of jam, I wasn’t really sure what loudness level I should aim for, so I just used my usual mastering level. Now I’ve realized that the mastered version of my track is waaaaay louder than the others, and I think that’s probably why you felt it was loud and mechanical. Still, your view is really helpful, and I’ll definitely try a more natural approach next time!