Stunning graphics : I enjoyed playing the game so much. Amazing palette choice. Really good room transition.
Nice little story, and nice music. SFX could add a lot if there was some.
The minigame was fun.
If I can suggest one thing, I think you should fix the word-wrapping problem, a video will explain it better : (youtube.com/watch?v=b_4pEe4chfs).
I don't have a lot to say because this game was really enjoyable. Good job !