This was pretty good! I didn't complete it yet but so far it's really fun. The animations are top quality too. Would be nice if there was an option to replay animations you have already seen from the main menu tho. I wish I could donate to this project but unfortunately I don't have enough money even for myself rn :(
But if you'd like I'd be willing to help you make changes to the text for free, for those grammatical mistakes you pointed out. No need to give any credit either. I won't be able to do alot but if you'd like ¯\_(ツ)_/¯