Sorry for the late reply. I've been busy working on the next version of the game.
Could you write down all the corrected sentences here?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SVncQ9LzyRECajzIL4aHPW4BTHCNrfKlJeB-lAeCw90/edit
You can choose whatever format you like.
Thank you so much for your offer. I'll give you credit in the game for it.