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So i played the 0.3 build and all I really have to say is that i loved it! i think one of the best aspects of Ich Will so far are some of the almost perfectly placed gramatical errors in some scenes. i wasnt sure if some were purposely like that for effect but it was interesting in general. The only really rare issue i had was keeping up with the pacing due to names characters saying the wrong lines or renamed charcters not having their title like Golem or Marie. Im definitely keeping an eye on this game.

Also, your english is very good! :)

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I'm not sure if I should make a custom nametag for Golem or Marie, I didn't want to because I wanted both of them to just be "another soldier/robot", if that's understandable, but I guess their characters are big enough to deserve their own. Also, thanks, english isn't my first language indeed, I hope I can hone my skills while I write and, ironically enough, I think I write better in english than spanish. Any help with grammatical mistakes is appreciated!

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Hey Amazoness, I use Grammarly to write my scripts for my videos and basically everything that is going to be English. I recommend, helps a lot!

I've been using it today, mate, it's great! Thanks for the advice.

Happy to help!