The amount of work put into every scene really shows. The animations, layouts, the sheer number of different sprite expressions for everyone, and many other details. It stands out, and it makes me smile to see another renpy dev taking advantage of everything you can do with the engine. It really elevates the game and I can't wait for part 2!! 💚
Also, I have a list of typos if that would be helpful? I figured the minor ones were just stylistic, but I think these ones were unintentional. I write without autocorrect too, so I always have a few myself.
I was also wondering if the nightmare scene was meant to have the menu displaying minor, moderate, and severe? Could just be a nightmare being nightmarey, but the way Cinnamon spoke about being an assailant, after she woke up, led me to beleive that it was a test menu, or that I missed a scene. I played the Steam version if that's any help to know.
I wish you the best of luck with making part 2!!!!