Unbelievable—you made this in six hours?? And is this your singing too? Simply phenomenal work. The mixing is highly impressive, and perfectly matches the vibe of the story (cool idea, by the way!)
This is highly polished, and really captures the ethereal vibe. I sure hope you can find some more time for the next jam—I would love to see what you could do with more than six hours. Still, I hope you are impressed and proud of yourself—this is quite a well-done track. Good job, and keep writing!