Feedback as promised (going to go brutal be aware) :
It's a very sweet minimalist piece, I liked the overall composition process. I like the dissonance at 0:27 if it was intentional it's a nice touch to break the "sweetness". I don't like the 0:56 dissonance though it really mess the feelings I had listening to it, same for 1:07. Section at 1:41, its getting too percussive, its probably the patch sound but you can solve this with EQ and transient shaper maybe to reduce the hammer hitting the notes or directly inside the patch if its available. You can also EQ a couple of high annoying frequency on the glock to help the listeners.
The piece is very gentle and sweet, simple works nicely, you can probably try some arrangements with more instruments and add some textures to it but in the end, it works simple. Still feel there is no real theme as a melody in your track, it's a lot of arpegios, maybe try and incorporate another instruments with an actual melody on top to give your track an identity.
Hope you can take well the critics, good luck !