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Hey! Thanks for the feedback. I'll see if I can fit an example into the rules somehow... and when you say "the copy" do you mean the example itself? Let me know also if you have any rules questions :)

The copy is the "what this game is" part. I think it'd be clearer if all that was in the rules, even if you need to add a page. The example might be better served if extended, or if you added other examples under the appropriate rules. A round by round, or die by die, example would add clarity. Or a video. Rules often read different than they play. I try to make any as a clear as possible. Economy of words is admirable, but not always in the best service of clarity. I should probably mention game design is my job, so I may be scrutinizing too much.

I appreciate the feedback! I just extended the example slightly and put it onto page 4, though that is late in the rules and not close to where the core rules themselves are. I also want the game to be as clear as possible while preserving the small footprint. I’ll think about whether some of the “what this game is” explanation belongs closer to the core rules instead. If you try it out, let me know how it goes!