I'm very specifically going to avoid the story topic because... on the one hand I get the reasoning but on the other he shoulda just finished it and moved on.
as for the overall look... honestly I'm only fine with the "Nosey" option because of the overall detail loon and not fixating on the face alone. If I fixate on the face alone, as I've stated in other comments, it just does not fit the head even with the more pronounced nose. It has Code Lyoko vibes lol. The Hybrid face and head fit, but the body doesn't and instead makes her feel younger than she realistically should be. And the Comfy style just feels like it washed out most details for a more pastel anime girl look... and I dislike it lolz. That's all my 2 cents on the topic :) as a fan for many years on itchio, that is my opinion.