This is my first time commenting here on itch, as it’s the primary way I can support this project.
When I installed this visual novel, I expected something more like a high school romance; however, after 15 hours of gameplay, it turned out to be so much more—in the best possible way.
The beginning is a bit slow, but it soon sparks a curiosity to explore every route and uncover the past both Jay and the school. I feel like something really great is being created here.
There’s a lot of detail even if a few bits might be missing here and there which really shows the love you have for the work.
I think the only weak point is the lack of CGs, but I can overlook that given that it's being made by essentially one person.
I’m already looking forward to Week 3; the spoilers the code you left really made me anxious for what's to come.
Spoilers and theories: if you haven't played the novel yet, don't read this part.
Each route goes into specific details (Week 2): Yuudai's focuses on his past with Jay, Kaito's seems to center on the murder, and Ryo's on the club's former leader. But would it be possible to have a route for Jay himself where he uncovers all of this?
Jay's albinism:what makes others view it as a "defect," and how does it affect him? For instance, regarding things like eating chocolate or being limited by certain physical traits?
The murder of Jay's parents: where did it happen, and how were the bodies discovered?
"Him": what is the motivation behind manipulating the world as we and sometimes Jay see it?
And the mysterious vendor: why does he sell items that manipulate reality, and what does he know about "Him"?