Heya! I like the interpretation of the theme, and cool story idea! I would suggest with this style of game, try to include some more imagery alongside the text to make the game more immersive, or add some more gameplay alongside the story beats. The little desk area was very cool, it could have been interesting to have the monitors integrated into the desk more solidly so that the desk doesn't feel as off to the side, but instead where the player is actively stationed. The text effects, while kinda cool, were tiring for the eyes pretty quickly, so I'd change that a bit. Also, very important, please proofread your text to make sure it makes sense, or have someone else proofread for you! With large sections of text like this, typos can be very distracting for the player, and there were many throughout the story that made the narrative less impactful, including a couple times where I could not understand what was actually being said. Overall, cool concept, would love to see it a bit more polished!