Good submission!
It fits the theme really well, but I feel like it could use a bit more... fun?
Since it's a narrative game, I think you could try adding more than two options when the player has to make a choice. You could also add some jokes to make the game a bit funnier, or maybe add some ambient sounds to make it feel more serious and immersive.
These are just suggestions, though! You did some great work. Nice game!