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Good submission!

It fits the theme really well, but I feel like it could use a bit more... fun?

Since it's a narrative game, I think you could try adding more than two options when the player has to make a choice. You could also add some jokes to make the game a bit funnier, or maybe add some ambient sounds to make it feel more serious and immersive.

These are just suggestions, though! You did some great work. Nice game!

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Thanks a ton for the feedback! This was my team's first Game Jam ever, and we were so worried about time we ended up making the game play a bit too shallow hahaha

But we think there is so much more we could do with the idea that we are open to all suggestions. We were thinking possibly adding cards that get added based on which cards you selected, multiple chapters with increasing intensity scenarios, perhaps more characters for replay attempts, unique evidence etc.

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Yess those are nice ideas indeed! Great game for your first time!!