I enjoyed reading this. I love how you have the fig rhyme and the creatures along side it. Super cool and inspiring. The intro paragraph is really cool, but it did confuse me and was wondering if that’s supposed to be the player characters falling off the cliff because it says “you”. But I understand now it’s someone else possibly being tested on for this flesh golem stuff.
I really like a lot. I just was having a hard time how I would run this and what part in the story the my party would play. It’s pretty spelled out how the story moves along between the acts and feels complete.
For act two I wasn’t sure why they would be venturing out along the paths outside the village in the first place. Just had a hard time placing the party in the story since it felt so complete as written.
Art and look and feel of the whole pamphlet is great. I really like the the cover and I would definitely be a player in this and have it in my collection for inspo!