Hi, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I also wish I'd done a bit more with the non-main characters, but at the end of writing it I was all out of oomph! The ideas still live rent-free in my head, though, so who knows?
English is my first language, unless you count translating from Australian. :D All the mistakes are either just regular ol' spelling errors, or in the case of the gender-flipping, a variable choice I made halfway through and still need to fix.