I agree with you on the two points, especially about the arrangement at the end. Thanks for commenting!
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And because I'm German and we don't intuitively apply the praise sandwich: Please don't read my nitpicks as me being unhappy with your creation - after careful, critical listening, I could come up with only two things I would change (one of which being 100% based on personal taste). Your piece is great and you better be proud of it! You might run into the awkward situation that you are the host of the jam and among the highest ranked participants =D