What a chapter ending! It left me wanting to know what would happen next.
Great job, you've clearly established the atmosphere well, along with the interaction with the two main characters.
Although the introduction was a bit confusing at first, it eventually clarifies the type of world the novel is set in.
However, the writing needs improvement, mainly due to the spelling errors I found in the Spanish version.
Another issue is with the interfaces. I encountered a bug when I select the "Menu" button while in-game, which redirected me to the main menu, something that shouldn't happen, I suppose.
Congratulations on your new project, and I hope to see more in the future.