Does "the eve of their birth" means their birthday, or the day they are born? If it is the later then the fact that they die one year after the Candlemaker's visit is pretty grim 😅
Some other feedbacks:
- It seems you forget to find a name for the third malice feature
- The Wax Demon Meltling is missing characteristics
- I think the fire weakness 5 on the Meltling is way too strong for a minion, even more so given that they deal fire damage when they take fire damage. I think a lower value, like 2, will already be a significant amount of damage dealt to the PCs
- Burn, Oh Wick of Life's name is on a different column than the rest of the ability
You managed to fit so much character and personality on those two pages, it's amazing!