I love what you have so far for this game! You make excellent use of your assets to create an atmosphere that complements the writing as it swings between times and emotions. The story itself is compelling as well, and I want to learn more about these characters and how they and the world around them have changed.
If I had to give any feedback as requested, I’d suggest tweaking some of the volume levels to make the audio feel a little more seamless, and maybe add a stopper or some sort of indicator that a page is about to wipe its text- I did miss a line or two by accidentally pressing on. You’ve really got a strong game, though- it’s all about the polish at this point! I’m excited to see where you go with this game and story! :]