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Dizzying pageantry is interesting, though I did have to read it quite a few times before I understood when to make the wager. It’s probably simpler to just have a player make a wager and remove the power roll? 

Art is very fun! I love it. I didn’t realize at first the glob stopper was a monster, I think the font needs to be bigger and maybe the blue line extended? Reading through the rest, it is very difficult to tell which abilities are for which monsters.

I think the formatting of your headers needs an overhaul, with consistent font sizes, and making the boxes tighter to the text when the text is smaller. I found it hard to read. I like the use of color and boxes, just needs some more cleaning up.

Recoup is probably my favorite ability, I love the use of the candied ground and how the hurricane can use them!

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Ah thanks for checking it out! Good to know about the dizzying pageantry. I was wondering if it would be more convenient to wrap the wager in a roll you will make anyways, but maybe just always rolling a separate d3 is more streamlined. Tho I wonder if there's also just a better way to phrase it. First time formatting anything like this or making a monster band. Lots I can do better for sure.