Honestly, probably the best visual novel game I ever played! I would highly recommend the experience, regardless of the fact that it is a porn game.
1. No AI is amazing, I am sick of low-quality random ‘visual novel’ games that are AI slop. I nearly cried of joy when you started crediting the real music producers and translators and artists.
2. A coherent story? In MY visual novel? Unheard of (until now)! There was an actual plotline and characters, all of which made sense and actually made me consider every action I’d take. Wonderful!
3. Beautiful art. Porn or not, the art style, camera effects, and other stylistic choices are actually so cool.
4. Steam… potentially? I saw the notice and wish you and your team the absolute best of luck! I would totally support you guys if I had money; this kind of idea, of real people doing things together to make something, is amazing.
The only issues I’ve found are some minor things, the majority of which have been heard, but also one of my own. Sometimes, you can take a slightly different route (one small change, especially one that feels like it would be irrelevant) than the intended one, and end up in the same places or even having the same ending cutscene, but not get the ending badge.
Other than that, beautifully good game! I wish you (and your dev team) the best of luck in continuing it!