Feedback:
I understand the two page limit is tough, but a little intro at the top about the kits would have been helpful to tie the kits together, or to the jam.
Ascetic – very cool flavor, interesting mechanic. I think the effect part about if you are bleeding could be worded a little clearer. I was surprised there was no speed bonus to the kit.
Intercessor – very flavorful, very interesting mechanic. Is it required that your allies participate if the they are in the area? I like the once you use text, very neat.
Valkryrie - If the title is a prerequisite, I'd put it before the kit, that might just be personal preference but the kit is useless to me if I don't know what I need to do to get it. Flavor for the effect is really cool.
Witchblade - very cool! For curse of bloodcunning, how long do you not take damage from bleeding? Is it only for the use of the signature ability, or until the end of combat? For shadow of corruption, I'd expect a potency here, this is very powerful.
Wilder – neat use of familiars! Very flavorful.
Overall, creative and flavorful, with some language tweaks needed, and maybe some power level adjustments. As a director I could see some liking and some dreading making intercessor missions. Personally, I think it's neat.