I tested your game, took some time to think about it, and it’s still stuck in my head, so that means that despite the criticism (positive or negative), it really left an impression on me, and that’s something I really like.
For me, the negative points are:
-At first, I was disappointed that we couldn’t make our own choices or have a bit more gameplay. We’re basically just spectators watching a story, and in a way, it’s almost the same as watching someone else play it.
-The pixel art looks a bit weird at certain moments in terms of proportions, and sometimes it feels like the characters change size.
-You can tell you were really proud of your save system lol. It wasn’t necessary to offer it after every single dialogue…
-It’s a shame that at the end we don’t get to see the machines in action, but only the result.
The positive points:
-The story is simple, but it works really well. I don’t know if the idea for the school came from you, but I really like it.
-Despite a few issues here and there, the game looks pretty good overall, and the atmosphere is really well done.
-The music and sound design are great!
-The game has a good length, and it’s really enjoyable to be able to finish it in one sitting.
Anyway, I had a really good time playing your game!
( Would you be interested in me doing a French translation for free ? )