Very well written, there's a lot of depth to explore here. I especially like the cassowary king, and the details of Sungiwut. A map would be lovely but I do agree you've done a good job of making the relationship between places pretty clear without one. Feel like the Port of Princes needs a line or two more, as it's referred to a few times but not itself described I don't think.
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Thanks so much! Sipsen was cut down for space. When I realized how tight the design space had to be I decided to forgo a map and limit the focus to exactly this scenario, here, in this corner of the forest. Port of Princes is a place I'd like to detail in the future! But not for this project 🙂↕️. Hopefully the general vibe is portrayed enough: it's a coastline city and fortification on the west side of the island, used to be controlled by a sultan and now a colonial possession.