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Finished reading, and it's really good.

I enjoyed a lot of things about this novel and how multi-layered it is. It was also quite interesting to compare it with its prequel, Blackberry Honey.

Firstly, I really appreciated the characters — both the main and supporting ones. I don't know if I remember correctly, since I read BH quite a long time ago, but in BB the supporting cast feels a bit more multifaceted and fleshed out? I mean mostly the maids — they just feel more alive.

Secondly, I adored the post-WW1 setting. It really is quite underused, and I think it was handled very well here: you don't see any ruins or veterans, but you do feel that gloomy, lingering atmosphere hanging over the post-Great War world. That, of course, feels especially potent when the characters talk about the people they've lost. The music helps quite a bit with that too.

And thirdly, I really liked how multi-layered the story is. Besides the main topic — our cute young yuri romance — it also touches on motherhood, grief, and self-awareness.

I also really liked the way you gave closure to Constance's character. Also also, I must say, I've grown quite fond of Bly as a setting. I hope we'll get to return there someday.

It genuinely read like a good book. Well done, Ebi.

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Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3

I spent more time here trying to flesh out the side characters than I did BH. The side characters there are pretty one note and they mostly exist for comedic purposes, and while the same can be said here, I wanted to give them some more screentime and show off some sides to them to make the universe feel more alive.

And I'm very fond of Constance, she's one of my favourite characters I've written so I wanted to give her some more screentime. Thank you once again!