I really like the premise and the dilemma offered to the players. It feels like something which can be easily dropped into an existing campaign, in an hex or something like that. Your writing is nice, but it has some typos and would benefit from a proofreading. Esthetically, I like your layout, but I think it’s a bit hard to understand (the table, in particular, isn’t very clear, both in terms of readability and of understanding what the two coloumns contain).