I absolutely loved the story! If this is just version 1.0, I can’t even imagine what’s coming next! The plot teaches a powerful lesson about self-acceptance, and I really appreciated that message. Here is what I LOVED about it:
- The Art: It’s beautiful! The fairy’s design is really well done. You don’t need to be the Mona Lisa or have 15 years of drawing experience for it to look great; her design fits her description and character perfectly!
- Options: Well implemented! Features like these are always crucial for tailored user preferences.
There are a few things I noticed, which is COMPLETELY normal for a first release:
- Readability Issues: If you know English or are a native speaker, reading this won’t be an issue. However, for non-native speakers, it gets complicated, which might cause players to leave or struggle to translate everything.
- The Music: It’s fine for a first version. My advice for the music would be to add a second track and experiment with different notes to improve the melody so it doesn’t sound too static.
- Future Updates: Even though the game has ended, there are still many intriguing things that would be fascinating to learn about in future updates. Will there be more parts to the story? Who exactly is the fairy? Even though they are simply referred to as “the fairy,” it leaves you deeply curious to know more in-depth details about the protagonist, Emilie, and the lore surrounding the fairies.
Honestly, I loved the game! I vastly prefer this over visual novels with nonsensical scripts. If you ever need a Spanish translation (either Latin American or European), I would love to offer my help for free! It is truly what I’m passionate about.
Best of luck with the project! I’ll definitely be following it because I’m eager to see what happens next with Emilie and the fairy. There is still so much to discover and I’m deeply intrigued! ⭐⭐⭐🌟