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The game is extremely polished for a jam (damn, it even has credits and playable guitar!). To some extent, that's probably thanks to the 7-person team, but huge props are due regardless :)

It has a very pleasant vibe. The music is awesome, and the pixel art is super charming. The story itself is also nicely written (ending was sad).

To be completely honest, I felt it lacked a slightly tighter connection to the theme. Camping is technically related, but the main fishing mechanic felt a bit disconnected to me. 

....and just when I was about to stop playing, it turned out there was gameplay related to constellations after all.

If I were to change anything, I’d probably start by having the player search for constellations first and then go fishing. That would tie into the theme a bit faster and then just show cozy camping vibes. Also one small minus because it is maybe third game in this jam that has some sad story about family and stars so it kind repetitive, but overall the game is great and I’m just nitpicking a little :)

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Thank you for the feedback! Didn't realize it would be such a common trope in this jam lol, but yeah, that is a valid piece of criticism :)

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Still, it's a great game (one of the best in whole jam for sure), so I wouldn't worry about my nitpicking :D Great job!

Wow, thank you for taking your time and writing such constructive feedback! Criticism is always greatly appreciated. We will use it to improve and release the game in a 100% finished state after the game jam ends. 

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Yeah, no problem. I will just add that if you take it further you probably can just ignore my comment about theme. Full game does not need to follow jam theme strictly. Camping vibes were strong with fishing and stuff :)

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Well, you're probably right. Although this game was made for the jam, and after we complete it, development will shift to other projects and game jams. We're open to ideas though!

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We where not supposed to add credits👀?, but anyway good game bro,Actually

I've genuinely got no idea where you got that info from? I'm really curious what you will say in response about the source of this information. Also, you're like the only person to say something like that. 

It would be against the spirit of a game jam to hide the members of our team. Not all of them have itch profiles to get added as contributors on the game's page. Still, in a matter of respect and appreciation, they deserve to get a rightful place in the credits.

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no think I'm you misunderstood, the dude you replied to was surprised or saw your addition of credits to you game as a amazing "feature" that you had time for, I saw it as a mandatory thing that's why I was surprised 

Oh, that clarifies. Just make sure your messages are understandable, because the way that was written was very confusing.