I like the premise a lot, and the prensetation is amazing. I am a tad confused about the epic tome the story becomes when more players roll more dice? But I wouldn't call it a flaw. Looking forward to trying this, collaborative storytelling is my favoruite part of RPG after all.
Hi!! thank you so much for your kind words and your interest in this game! My opinion regarding the epic tone is that. . it could be thrown away! the story can just be whacky/magical/funny/chaotic/mystery and become alltogether else entirely if the table improv resulted in said story! it's okay to twist it to your desired genre! (You can use any cover too! so it doesn't have to be epic medieval like the current game jam have)
Do let me know if there's any feedback after trying it! Looking forward to hear how it goes :D