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I had the chance to try your game and I really enjoyed the overall atmosphere. The dark fantasy setting, mysterious world, and exploration-focused structure create a really interesting experience. The combination of RPG progression, boss fights, choices, and multiple paths gives the game a lot of potential.

The atmosphere is definitely one of the strongest parts of the game. The music fits the world very well and creates a strong mood during exploration and combat. The environments and visual style also help create that dark fantasy feeling. I liked the idea of having different paths to explore, discovering new areas, collecting items, and making choices that can lead to different outcomes.

The combat system also has some interesting ideas. The dice-based mechanics add a layer of uncertainty and decision-making, and overcoming difficult encounters feels rewarding when you understand the systems better.

There are some areas that could be improved. The biggest issue for me was the storytelling. The mysterious writing style fits the atmosphere, but sometimes the dialogue and descriptions felt too cryptic, making it difficult to understand the world and the meaning behind certain events. Making some parts clearer would help players become more connected to the story.

The combat and progression systems could also use more polish. Some mechanics, especially around the dice system, were not always easy to understand, and clearer feedback would make fights feel more satisfying. Some quality-of-life improvements, like clearer explanations of healing, resting, and progression, would also help the overall experience.

Overall, I think the game has a very interesting foundation. The atmosphere, music, dark fantasy style, and exploration elements create a memorable experience. With more polish on the writing, combat balance, and player guidance, I think the game can become much stronger.

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We are also working on our own indie game called ZAR, a 3D dice-based roguelike where strategy meets luck. You can upgrade your dice, discover new augments and relics, create different builds, and experience a new run every time.

If you have some time, we would love to hear your thoughts and feedback:

https://happysealgames.itch.io/zar

Good luck with the development, and I hope to see how the game evolves in the future!

Thank you very much for your constructive feedback; I will work on the points you raised. I hope you enjoyed the game and will continue to do so. I am working on it day by day, and I will try out your game as soon as possible. Thanks again—it helps me a great deal.