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I may have been very liberal with the lesbian scenes, knowing that they would a contested part of the novel for some people (and they did).

 I crammed a bit of everything in the 0.1 to showcase what the themes would be, and what the "tags" would be, a way to do an early selection of my audience, and hopefully don't have to deal with anti-lesbian sentiment for the years needed to carry on and finish the story.

It is also true that the setting is very much impregnated with debauchery, so that I didn't include as many "signals" of sexual activity just to avoid being labeled as "fuck fest", however hypocritical or irrelevant the term might be speaking about an AVN.

I will consider your comments, and see if I can work out a way to better mesh everything together.

Peace and out!

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Lesbian scenes are hot and make perfect sense in the world setting, it's explained well and fits part of the world building. My initial concern was just based around effort to ground the MC background and plot. That said I do have only one ask, please consider when creating any forced sharing/cheating narrative for love interests, that it's optional regardless of gender or at least optional for the main love interests (if it has 1 or even more main LIs). Cheating is meant to hurt, it's non-consensual after all and that is what impacts the reader. 

I look forward to what's to come!