Greatly polished. the settings alone are a nice touch story jam games that leave the text go slow always ruin it for me so having an option for that is an entirely different experience. the writing is great for 10 days, I like the metaphors. the art style is great. the music fits the mood extremely well, a bit jarring on my ears but thatās personal bias against a classic technique so donāt mind me. I got ending two, canāt be bothered to replay the entire thing again to get different endings (especially since the criteria for how to get an ending is not clear at all) so ig my feedback for this would be splitting it into chapters so itās easier to go for more endings and making it clearer what is our role as a player. what choice we do matters. other than that, great job. no reason to dwell on it!