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Yup this is peak lol. So far the biggest draw for me were the characters; they're super detailed and well-modeled (and HOT), and they also have fun, interesting personalities as well as ties to the world setting and (very importantly) to each other. I'm enjoying the group dynamic very much and i really look forward to seeing them interact more between themselves and with the story at large. I'm mostly repeating what others have said in the comments though lol so let me bring up a couple things that i haven't seen mentioned here at least:

- it felt like the prose quality declined a little bit as i proceeded further into the game. Some spotty grammar and even typos started popping up (nothing too major, mind you) but i do think it's an important thing for a VN to pay attention to.

- this is probably unfeasible for a project of this size but i would love it if the game had some amount of voice work! I recently played Inanna Revenge and i thought that game did a great job at implementing impactful voice work while not having any actual line reads.

That about covers what i wanted to say. Once again, i'm really looking forward to more content!! And also, congrats on the big popularity boost the game got! It is 1000000% deserved :)

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Thank you a ton for the feedback, and your words!
It's surprising just how many typos and silly mistakes I overlooked. I'll do my best to avoid that.
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About the voice work. That's a topic that has bee mentioned a lot lately, and one I'd rather not mess around with. But the idea is definitely on the table.
I'll take a look at that Inanna Revenge then.
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