Holy cow this is your first jam?? this is great! minigames great art great music multiple tracks even a great narrative everything is just so perfect! I didn’t end up finishing it since I’m really not in the mood for topics like these but I enjoyed what I played! Favorite game in the jam till now, keep going!
edit: the only feedback I can give has to do with the text: 1- it’s waay too slow for me, this either needed a settings for the player to set text speed or a button that skips the “text being written section” 2- as you can see, how the text currently works is that it’s gradually adding letters to the textbox to simulate how typing looks. which is great, but text wrapping fucks with it. what you should be doing instead is having all text already prewritten and prewrapped just make it gradually become visible. this removes the “last word gets written in the top line but when it turns out too big it snaps into the bottom line”
but this is just nitpicking ofc, great game!
edit: I’m (more like we’re) interested in jamming with you, if you are interested feel free to reach out to me on discord at @sir_lime so we discuss details