Hey there, glad to hear back from you.
Sorry, I didn't mean to go overboard with the story, I just thought it might be a nice way to 'wrap up' the main game. I liked how frustrated the Boss was getting with the Superior, so I figured it would be nice to put her (i.e. the Superior) in her place at the end of it all and give the main employee management minigame a bit of replay value. (I also didn't realize that you could check the trust level in the pause menu).
Other than some of the bugs with the delivery minigame, I did enjoy both it and the main employee management minigame, I just wanted a reason to go for 100% completion. I'm glad to hear that you've got more plans for them.
And about the art thing. I actually went back to try and figure out what I meant as well. I think the issue for me is that her breasts and nipples (especially the nipples) look 'flat'. Like, I know this is pixel art and you're only using a single level of shading (except for certain things like the Boss's hair and faces when characters blush) but I feel like there could be a bit more shading on her breasts to give them the same feel of depth and volume as when she has her shirt on.
Yeah, that's kinda what I was talking about in regard to the breasts.
Also, I attempted to illustrate what I meant with the nipples. I know the ratio doesn't quite match your art, but I tried to get it as close as possible to the best of my (limited) ability.
Forgive my shoddy attempt, I am very much NOT a pixel artist. (I'm more of a writer, hence my initial focus on the story).
