I am extremely impressed, Chapter 1 had its flaws from pacing but the writing was extremely gritty, raw and high quality. Chapter 2 was also quite saddening.
It was a quite emotional roller coaster. The quality of writing and the romance interests is extremely well written, the story is a bit slow and I'm not a fan of the main character being so weak and useless, but I'm glad in Chapter 2 the MC is more pro active in their investigation and not just dragged along for the ride.
I'm very interested in the future of this story, unlike most stories this one has strong potential, not just another cheap romance story.
I hope to see more soon.