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I am back after playing shift 1 and 2 which I found really enjoyable and interesting and posted as a video. But as I started to play Shift 3 I realized that there was something really lacking that same spark of creativity and danger that I was just getting excited for while playing Shift 1 and 2.
I really hope the developer reads these comments because I am sorry but I really felt like Shift 3 was written by AI it lacked a certain human quality to it and left me feeling like I was just wondering around for hours just clicking on the same things over and over again which was extremely boring, lackluster and didn't hold anything exciting. There was no action which was disappointing except for the end but even that had nothing to do with Biker Boy and his supposedly yandere and crazy elements.
Spoilers: Stop here if you don't want to know more about the game. I played Biker Boy Path 1 but I have no idea what Path 2 meant, and it would help if the developer explained that part in the game.
Yes, it answered some questions about biker boy and why he is like this, but it still left me feeling empty inside and had way too many mistakes and contradictions. For one thing Biker Boy is supposed to be illiterate, yet he could in shift 3 write his name and text. He also spoke like a strange and very monotonous textbook using big grammar words which is impossible without schooling. It also didn't make sense that he was in the Army as they would never let someone in that couldn't read and write. It would have been better if he was kidnapped as a child by some evil people, put in a basement and tortured and trained till he was a killing machine like an assassin that only knows how to kill and obey which would explain the mad dog aspect but he has triggers like he doesn't know how to talk to people or have relationships because of extreme isolation and is hiding his face because he was left in the dark so much that it's comforting to him and maybe his face because he was beaten till he had no identity left. He had no schooling of course just the schooling of killing and obeying his handlers. But he escaped and has been on the run ever since and now afraid to show his face in case they hunt him down. That fabrication would have better explained his mannerisms and PTSD including the reason why he was built like a brick wall.
The MC is way too stupid also and seems to be just bullying Biker Boy which is not fair including they are too clingy and needy which made me not like the MC including their stupid phrases after a npc explained something MC would answer with "What" like they had no idea what was just explained to them even two times, a real dunce. And whom spends hours at a stranger's workplace which is a dangerous place a garage including being allowed to just wonder around when they are not welcome to begin with. It toke me forever to move the story forward just by clicking on each dark figure and things that were not relevant to the game, and the conversations became tedious without any action. It just felt too unrealistic and the conversations were just too fake as strangers would not tell another stranger about their co-workers past who they work with for 2 years it just seemed too bizarre.
In conclusion I really hope that the developer looks at this and maybe moves forward with Shift 4 being more interesting and exciting give us some real Yandere Biker boy traits and craziness as you promoted it to be don't tell people that this is slow burn nobody likes slow burns in entertainment if they want to gain an audience at least in my opinion. To keep them interested you need to give it passion, blood and crazy to keep them intrigued in the yandere world. Just saying.
I am not saying any of this to insult but please take this as constructive criticism only here as a writer myself I am also my worse critic. In hindsight I really enjoy your game except for the torturous monotony of Shift 3 and dim-witted MC. And I am looking forward to following your game to see how it develops hopefully with more drama and action.