This is huge for a 4-page zine, and packed with things to do! I question some of your layout decisions, but I realize you're cramming things in (like I did, honestly). Having the monster name and art =below= the text in the bestiary took me a minute to figure out, but I managed. Solid art, and you've built a whole world around the secret at the end of the adventure. And that secret opens up a whole new world for the party to explore. I love this!