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You've got a solid adventure here that fits the title. You've provided excellent reasons for everything to exist in a 5-room dungeon. Those page margins seem huge to me, and you could use some of that space to break up the text into sections using heading titles or art. Overall excellent work!

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Thank you! Good idea on the margins. I've gone back and forth with margins for different projects, I think you make a good point.