The novel has a good premise, although I feel the pace at which it develops should be polished better, especially with the activities that the protagonist does with the others.
I say this because sometimes the story with some characters feels a bit rushed, even if it's just an introduction to each member.
But it might be fixed in the next update, which is coming soon and I'll keep an eye on the updates!
Keep improving and I hope to see more about this world. 😁