What do we have here? A lengthly introduction read aloud text, a dialogue with the main NPC with set talking points, another NPC with exactly one task to fulfill. Then a check to get a bonus on the next day. Followed by another long read-aloud text, an encounter which can got one of one ways (follow the monster), a fight no DM would let the party loose as it’s literally the only combat to be had, and a check not DM would let the party fail as it leads to the final explaining readaloud text. After that a final reveal and the end.
You know how we call something like that. It’s a novel. And I like novels. It just wasn’t the assignment ;)
The prose would have gotten 5 stars, if the mother din’t poop out the spawn, but birthed them. A picture even more grotesque but fitting to the names of the creatures.
This comment will read like a bad review. It isn’t! I like the story, I like the imagery, I like the writing!