Thanks so much, glad you've been enjoying it! That's definitely valid critique, the "anonymous" player is definitely pretty difficult to write. I tried creating a character that anyone can insert themselves into easily, but that gets harder and harder to do as the story progresses and it's too late to go back now and try and create a character for the player now as that would change the story in its entirety.
Definitely something for me to learn from for any future games I make though!