hey hey, 8x a6 pages gang.
very clean work, has that sort of scavengers reign style swag where a relatively "light" art style is juxtaposed against gruesome topics. love to see it.
- having extra space to credit yourself and the fonts used in the booklet itself is a flex. i see u.
- read this as a .pdf but i appreciate how you set the cover up in a way where if someone were to flip this open they'd immediately get the x-ray version of it. very clever.
- no way this one also has piss in it. same hat.
- okay hear me out, how about instead of three flares, you get two flares. if im playing this with a two player party, that's 6 flares total for 5 rooms explicitly described as dark or infested, which makes them feel like a no-brainer to use frequently. bumping that flare count down a little would make using them feel a little more tense, y'know?
- the double meaning with "which it does with incredible delicacy" is fun. love the thin black crinkly tape in the cranium as well. lot of cool textures going on here.
- on that note: obviously there's the space constraint here to consider, but i would have loved a bit more contrast between the exterior and interior descriptions. those interiors all have lovely wet guts, but i feel like some dry, coarse surface descriptions would go a long way to really emphasize the difference between the two environments and the player's descent into the body.
great work!