I think if this had improved layout and information presentation, it would be overall considered a higher-ranking entry. The writing is good, and the art has a really unique, raw vibe to it.
I like that you can cut out the pieces, but I wasn't sure exactly what to do with them. At first, I thought you'd show where the characters were on the map, but they're too big.
I also love the ethiopic script and (I assume) mythology. A really underserved region in TTRPGs.