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There's room to grow into formatting and layout but it's clear that you've been playing and/or reading the material of this great big hobby of ours. Please keep writing! This is the kind of completeness that turns out great modules. I hope you got to playtest this because it's pretty cool!

Just the way you described the arcane ooze reminds me to always keep the prose evocative, even with simple descriptions of a creature. 

"It flows against gravity, squeezes through cracks, and leaves smoking magic in its wake."

It sure does! 

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Thanks for the constructive criticisim. I wholeheartedly agree with it, btw. I feel like both layout and formatting are my weakest skills. I put the kaibosh on both until the very last minute, because I knew it would frustrate the hell out of me. Thanks for commenting, it means a lot to me.