Thank you so much, and especially for the thorough/thoughtful review! Very much appreciated, and I basically agree on all fronts. I knew using the cover purely as a cover would be limiting but I just couldn’t help it, but it definitely made me make some hard choices and there were some bits of the adventure that were squished down to fit more than I would have liked.
Very good tips on the traps in the dungeon, those being something other than fire is absolutely the right call and I’ll be making that change as soon as judging is over.
As for the canyon map, I also wish it was less linear but it’s surprisingly hard to find non-linear canyons (particularly ones with public domain hand-drawn maps) and this was sadly the best I could find.
Thanks again!