I like your adventure quite a lot. The theme fits well, mixing fantasy and sci-fi elements, in a dangerous mountainous environment. The concise writing works well. The art is so cool. The bestiary is incorporated well into the story. Excellent.
Viewing post in Calling Upon the Bright Blizzard jam comments
Thanks! I got the art from a public domain collection here on itch. https://itch.io/c/7741613/public-domain-illustrations-packs