A nice submission outside the usual western settings. Well done too!
I presume this in part stems from trying to stick to inspiration stories that I am yet unfamiliar with, but I would have liked to see more going on in the random tables. Limiting nearly all entries to being either minor mundane effects or (as written) just sightings of mundane animals. I was also disappointed to find that the city Qoloe was only described via a single location. The page limit gets us all but I think perhaps this adventure could have provided more adventure material had it focused only on the overgrown city rather than a mini-dungeon, in a city, in a hexcrawl.
Great submission overall! I hope a few lines of critique don't come off as anything less than appreciation for the piece.