This art absolutely rips, and it manages not to sacrifice legibility to do it. At least not in the realm of contrast/organization, which is where something this stylized usually gets carried away.
The rules are fun and interesting too. Really think you did something special with your title prompt.
EDIT: If I have one tiny nitpick, it's that it felt kind of redundant to mention everything's a living candle in the D12 room table. But it almost feels like that was the joke?